EI S05 prose: Galdren and the sylph (#9689)

Fix some EI dialogue inconsistencies
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[message]
speaker=Dacyn
#po: "you" being Owaec and Gweddry, they're both questioning him
message= _ "I suppose you have a right to know of the adversary we face. I will tell you about Mal-Ravanal."
message= _ "I suppose you have a right to know of the adversary we face. Mal-Ravanal was, at first, a mage of the realm like me. His fall began during the reign of our previous king, Haldric VII..."
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{FADE_TO_BLACK}
[message]
speaker=Dacyn
#po: Dacyn is an unreliable narrator, he only tells events the way he interprets them but not necessarily as an absolute truth
#po: and because Gweddry and Owaec only hear Dacyn's side of the story, they are prone to misinterpretation of motives and events as well
#po: TODO in 1.19 change this text to "Early in the reign ..." (issue #8387)
#po: Happened by 589 YW at the latest, Haldric VII reigned 585-612 YW, and it's now 626 YW.
message= _ "Late in the reign of Haldric VII, a Sylph of Lintanir forest came to Weldyn and spoke of the emergence of a power that threatened to corrupt Wesnoths greatest mages and eventually bring ruin to the entire kingdom. She offered only a small piece of cryptic advice, that avoiding this calamity would require a peerless wisdom to harness the use of tremendous power."
#po: this is the same Eryssa from Northern Rebirth, now old
#po: Northern Rebirth happened in 535 YW, while the event being spoken about here happened in 589 YW (it's now 626 YW)
message= _ "The greatest seer in the land, an elderly Sylph named Eryssa, came to Weldyn and spoke of the emergence of a power that threatened to corrupt Wesnoths greatest mages and eventually bring ruin to the entire kingdom. She offered only a small piece of cryptic advice, that avoiding this calamity would require a peerless wisdom to harness the use of tremendous power."
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[message]
speaker=Dacyn
#po: Ravan is also of an unspecified gender, and not assumed to be only human
#po: Same as Mal-Ravanal, translations can prefer plural pronouns or language default pronoun if the former is not possible
#po: Happened in 589 YW, it's now 626 YW.
message= _ "Thus, the King decided to seek this peerless savant. In all the land, there were two magi that clearly stood out from the rest. Myself, and my good friend Ravan, a mage from the east. The King, wishing to choose the best advisor, sent us both before Galdren. Then he conversed with the seer privately. None know what was said, but when he came out he announced that the seer was dead, and he had... chosen... me as his new advisor."
message= _ "The King endeavoured to seek this peerless savant. In all the land, there were two magi that clearly stood out from the rest. Myself, and my good friend Ravan, a mage from the east. The King, wishing to choose the best advisor, sent us both before Eryssa. Then he conversed with the seer privately. None know what was said, but when he came out he announced that the seer was dead, and she had... chosen... me as the Kings new advisor."
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[message]
speaker=Dacyn

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[message]
speaker=spirit
message= _ "The mage called Dacyn is dying! It is time for you to be reborn!"
message= _ "The mage called Dacyn is dying! It is time for you to be reborn under a new name: Mal-Dakan."
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[message]
speaker=Dacyn
message= _ "-I... -I am no lich! I am no harbinger of darkness, unlike Ravan!"
message= _ "-I... -I am no necromancer! Everything I have done is for the good of Wesnoth."
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[message]
speaker=spirit2
message= _ "The wielder of the red stone shall become intertwined with the darkness between worlds, whether they will it or not. You sought this Amulet of your own will, O Magnificent Dacyn!"
speaker=spirit
message= _ "Was it? Was it for the good of all Wesnoth when you took Iliah-Malals Amulet of the Veil, turning to the darkness and letting us into your soul?"
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[message]
speaker=spirit
message= _ "Was it for the good of Wesnoth when you enslaved the seer Eryssas senile mind, so the King would choose you as his advisor over Ravan?"
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[message]
speaker=Dacyn
message= _ "I... I needed this power! I had to safeguard Irdya!"
message= _ "I... I needed that power! I was the only one who could be trusted to safeguard Irdya!"
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[message]
speaker=spirit