some more text refinements and fixes

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Nils Kneuper 2008-09-30 11:48:57 +00:00
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3 changed files with 6 additions and 6 deletions

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difficulties=EASY,HARD
difficulty_descriptions={MENU_IMG_TXT2 "units/human-loyalists/horseman-moving.png~RC(magenta>red)" _"Horseman" _"(Beginner)"} +
";" + {MENU_IMG_TXT2 "units/human-loyalists/grand-knight.png~RC(magenta>red)" _"Knight" _"(Challenging)"}
description= _ "An evil mage is threatening the local village and its inhabitants. When their leader Bjarn sends for aid from his brother Arne, he is victorious, but Bjarn himself is kidnapped. Can you rescue him?
description= _ "An evil mage is threatening the small village Maghre and its inhabitants. The villages mage Bjarn send for his brother to help, but not all goes as planned. Can you help?
(Novice level, 4 scenarios; the 'Hard' version may challenge more experienced players.)"

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background=story/Two_Brothers_M2P1.png
[/part]
[part]
story=_ "Not knowing those rumors, Arne made to follow them, although his horsemen would be at disadvantage if being attacked in the forest."
story=_ "Not knowing those rumors, Arne followed them, although his horsemen would be at disadvantage if being attacked in the forest."
background=story/Two_Brothers_M2P1.png
[/part]
[/story]
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message= _ "Come on men. A bracing walk in the woods never hurt anyone, did it?"
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Speaker
role=speaker
message= _ "But old tales talk about mighty ghosts ruling this forest. They kill everyone who dares to enter."
[/message]
[message]
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[/message]
[message]
role=speaker
message= _ "I am glad that we at least don't have to face ghosts. But they are in advantage since with our horses we will have problems between the trees."
message= _ "I am glad that we at least don't have to face ghosts. But those Elves are in advantage since with our horses we will have problems between the trees."
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Arne
message= _ "Pah, just stay on the paths and let our spearmen and bowmen take care of those who oppose us. I have faced greater evil than those amateurs."
message= _ "Pah, just stay on the paths and let our spearmen and bowmen take care of those who dare to oppose us. I have faced greater evil than those amateurs."
[/message]
[/event]

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background=story/Two_Brothers_M4P1_the_end.png
[/part]
[part]
story= _ "Arne and his men left the village assured that it was in good hands with his brother protecting and guiding the villagers. On their journeys they faces several other obstacles. Some tales even mention Arnes name together with the famous elvish lord Kalenz, but this is a different story..."
story= _ "Arne and his men left the village assured that it was in good hands with his brother protecting and guiding the villagers. On their journeys they faced several other obstacles. Some tales even mention Arnes name together with the famous elvish lord Kalenz, but this is a different story..."
background=story/Two_Brothers_M4P1_the_end.png
[/part]