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Storyline prose fixes for DiD.

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data/campaigns/Descent_Into_Darkness/Descent_story.cfg
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#define STORY_SAVING_HALAL
[story]
[part]
story=_ "Malin Keshar was born 10 years after death of Haldric IV. He grew up in the northern border town of Hal'al, the second child and eldest son of the baron of the city. Every summer when the mountain passes became clear, orcs came down from the north looking to prove themselves in battle. Every year Hal'al's guards repelled the raids, though some of the townsfolk were always lost. Malin's father lead raiding parties to disrupt the orc encampments and send the orcs back to the North."
story=_ "Malin Keshar was born 10 years after death of Haldric IV. He grew up in the northern border town of Hal'al, the second child and eldest son of the baron of the city. Every summer when the mountain passes became clear, orcs came down from the north to prove themselves in battle. Every year Hal'al's guards repelled the raids, though some of the townsfolk were always lost. Malin's father led raiding parties to disrupt the orc encampments and send the orcs back to the North."
[/part]
[part]
story=_ "At the age of 10 a mage who passed through the town sensed strong magical abilities in Malin. His parents, seeing the chance for him to live away from the constant battles with the orcs, arranged for him to be sent to the mage community on the Isle of Anduin. There he studied for 8 years, while back at home the orc raids increased in their frequency and ferocity. Before Malin could finish his training, however, he was expelled for playing a cruel prank on a fellow apprentice."
story=_ "When Malin was 10, a mage who passed through the town sensed strong magical abilities in the boy. His parents, seeing a chance for him to live away from the constant battles with the orcs, arranged for him to be sent to the mage community on the Isle of Anduin. There he studied for 8 years, while back at home the orc raids increased in their frequency and ferocity. Before Malin could finish his training, however, he was expelled for playing a cruel prank on a fellow apprentice."
[/part]
[part]
# good to have an arrow that arcs across the screen here
story=_ "Malin returned to Hal'al just as summer began only to find more misfortune. Even as arrived, an early, unexpected orc raid was being conducted against Hal'al. Malin watched as his father took an arrow in the chest and fell lifeless to the ground."
story=_ "Malin returned to Hal'al just as summer began only to encounter more misfortune. Even as arrived, an early, unexpected orc raid was being conducted against Hal'al. Malin watched as his father took an arrow in the chest and fell lifeless to the ground."
[/part]
[part]
story=_ "Shaken by the loss of their commander, the human defense began to falter. As the orcs roared in anticipation of victory, skeleton warriors poured out of the woods to the orc's rear. The soldiers watched in amazement as the skeletons cut down orc after orc and then melted back into the forest."
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# file=gwiti.png
# x,y=284,204
# [/image]
story=_ "Shortly a man dressed in the robes of a necromancer emerged from the trees. 'Allow me to introduce myself. I am Darken Volk. While I know your kingdom does not love my kind, I think it vital that we put aside our differences for the moment. The orc menace grows in the North, and I know not if any of the border towns will stand without some assistance. For now, I ask only to rest in your town for a few days.'"
story=_ "Shortly a man dressed in the robes of a necromancer emerged from the trees. 'Allow me to introduce myself. I am Darken Volk. While I know your kingdom does not love my kind, I think it vital that we put aside our differences for the moment. The orc menace grows in the North, and I misdoubt any of the border towns can stand without some assistance. For now, I ask only to rest in your town for a few days.'"
[/part]
[part]
story=_ "Drogan, the captain of the guard, replied, 'Surely you know that the penalty for necromancy is death. For your aid we will promise you rest and safety. Upon your departure, however, you are banished from these lands, not to return on pain of death. We thank you for your help, but need no alliances with those who deal only in dark magic.'"
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[/message]
[message]
speaker=Drogan
message=_ "Although I dislike sending it out so early, the raiding party should clear out the orc encampments and leave us a relatively quiet summer."
message=_ "Although I dislike sending a raiding party out so early, they should clear out the orc encampments and leave us a relatively quiet summer."
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Malin Keshar
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#define STORY_PEACEFUL_VALLEY
[story]
[part]
story=_ "Fighting tears and rage, Malin wanders to the east. He barely knows or cares where his feet take him. He curses the elder mages for sending him from the Isle of Anduin only to be thrust into conflict. He curses Drogan for banishing him. Mostly, however, he curses the orcs for taking first his father and now his place in society through their ceaseless attacks."
story=_ "Fighting tears and rage, Malin wanders to the east. He barely knows or cares where his feet take him. He curses the elder mages for sending him from the Isle of Anduin only to be thrust into conflict. He curses Drogan for banishing him. Most fiercely, he curses the orcs for taking first his father and now his place in society through their ceaseless attacks."
[/part]
[part]
story=_ "Three days travel outside Hal'al, Malin runs into Darken Volk, the same necromancer who had saved Hal'al and taught Malin to raise the dead not long ago. The necromancer takes pity on Malin in his friendless state, and asks Malin to travel with him. As the weeks pass, he teaches Malin more dark magic."
story=_ "Three days travel outside Hal'al, Malin meets Darken Volk, the same necromancer who had saved Hal'al and taught Malin to raise the dead not long ago. The necromancer takes pity on Malin in his friendless state, and asks Malin to travel with him. As the weeks pass, he teaches Malin more dark magic."
[/part]
[/story]
#enddef
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[/message]
[message]
speaker=Malin Keshar
message=_ "Yes! Just give me the chance to get my revenge on those creatures!"
message=_ "Yes! I thirst for revenge on those creatures!"
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Darken Volk
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#define DIALOGUE_BOTR_ORCDIE
[message]
speaker=Malin Keshar
message=_ "Feel my wrath, you vile creature!"
message=_ "Feel my wrath, vile creature!"
[/message]
#enddef
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#define DIALOGUE_OW_START
[message]
speaker=Malin Keshar
message=_ "Since the very founding of Wesnoth you have hounded humans at every turn. You have raided my home at every opportunity. You have trampled our fields slaughtered our livestock. You have brought war to a place of peace, and death to a place of life. You have killed without remorse, and despoiled that which was once beautiful. You have murdered my father and caused endless trouble to me. Now I shall have my revenge on you. Expect no mercy from me, because you have long since lost the right to it. I will crush you into the dust. The attacks on Hal'al will stop here and now. When I bring word of your demise the town will cheer my triumphant return."
message=_ "Since the very founding of Wesnoth you have hounded humans at every turn. You have raided my home at every opportunity. You have trampled our fields, slaughtered our livestock. You have brought war to a place of peace, and death to a place of life. You have killed without remorse, and despoiled that which was once beautiful. You have murdered my father and caused endless trouble to me. Now I shall have my revenge on you. Expect no mercy from me, because you have long since lost the right to it. I will crush you into the dust. The attacks on Hal'al will stop here and now. When I bring word of your demise the town will cheer my triumphant return."
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Borth
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#define STORY_FOREVER_AND_EVER_AMEN
[story]
[part]
story=_ "Years pass. Every summer when the mountain passes become clear, the Lich sends his soldiers to attack the orcs, removing any human, elven, or dwarvish patrols that get in the way. Every year the undead inflict some damage before being repelled and retreating to the caves."
story=_ "Years pass. Every summer when the mountain passes become clear, the lich sends his soldiers to attack the orcs, removing any human, elven, or dwarvish patrols that get in the way. Every year the undead inflict some damage before being repelled and retreating to the caves."
[/part]
[part]
story=_ "Rumors circulate of a lich that preys on scouting patrols. A hero, gathering his loyal troops to him, decides to put an end to the evil."